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Monday, November 24, 2014

GREAT DISCOVERY ...a story

GREAT DISCOVERY
- Rescue of the aliens - 



We had landed on a hard, rocky planet with a lot of craters. We started looking around and found that  one of the craters was more than a mile deep ! Me and Mary (my space partner) decided to explore the deep, dark hole, so we put on our latest-technology suction boots and waddled down the hole. 

When we reached the bottom, I picked up some strange stones for study, and then we got out our brushing machine. Just as I started brushing the dust , it cracked some of the stone and we saw a strange kind of A,B,C,D  writing on it. It was very hard to read it because of the curly-wurly lines on the stone. I brushed the A,B,C,D and guess what !!! 

A green flash came and the floor started to crack ...slowly and more slowly. We could hear a loud, buzzing sound under our feet. There was a loud 'SNAP' ! And we fell at 15 MPH ! We were tumbling down and one of the cold stones I had collected was thrown.  

When we got to see properly, we saw a large slimy puddle. We were going to land in it ! SPLASH ! SPLASH ! SPLASH ! We landed in the sticky gel. We had to do our highest jumps to get out so that we would not be trapped. The walls of the hole were filled with paint-like splats. 

They felt like goo. We got out our spades to dig out some of the goo, but just then an odd SQUISHY sound came and the goo transformed into an ALIEN !! And many more little aliens came out of the goo. 

The master alien had a white furry hood and the rest of them were the colour of dark tree barks. Their body was very skinny. Their eyes were small and green. Their hands had suction pads at the tips of their fingers. The master's antennas were covered with the hood.

The master alien spoke in a squeaky, robotic voice, "W-e   a-r-e   t-i-r-e-d   o-f   l-i-v-i-n-g   h-e-r-e!"

I was scared at first but then I said, "Ok. Let's go !"

"H-o-w?"

"Don't worry. I have a plan". 

I got a gas pipe from my backpack and sprayed it. Because of the gas, a small volcano exploded , the land tilted and made it into a staircase for us.

The alien master thanked me with a golden trophy. It was shaped like a GOO SPLAT. Mary drove us back to earth in our spaceship.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Vedaant, I really enjoyed reading your story !
    I felt like I was watching a sci-fi movie while reading it :)

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